Randomness I Don't Know How to Title

So, guys...LOOK I'M POSTING!!! HA, I FEEL GOOD ABOUT THIS!!!! Okay, anyway, I going to be gone this coming week. Just thought I would let you know. I'm going to this thing called Allstate, it's a choir thing. 'Cause I'm awesome and in choir XD
SOOOOOOO, like I hath said before I am featuring a lot more of my writing, because really that, music, and acting are my favorite thing to do (besides general nerdom) so, I am going to give you another snippet. OH, and if ever anyone wants to say they want a specific snippet go ahead =) I'm open to suggestion.
As soon as I stepped into the portal I felt like I was floating, in fact I didn't feel like I was moving at all. I felt oddly calm for a moment, then I felt a searing pain from my stomach and my head began to throb. Then when it felt like I might explode from the inside out I felt a hand in mine and it pulled me out. I fell on Jack as I struggled to breath.
"Okay, so sorry, I forgot to tell you you need to keep walking or the portal will end up tearing you apart from the inside out. I know it is an important detail but I didn't want to scare you with the whole rip you apart from this inside out thing and kinda forgot to mention the walking."
I didn't even say anything back nor did I move. My body was exhausted and all I wanted to do at that moment was sleep.
"Hey you okay?" He sat up forcing me to move, seeing as I was on top if him. He looked me up and down with his shifting eyes and seemed genuinely concerned about me. "You need a medic." He stated bluntly.
He stood and gently picked me up and carried me on his back. I really wanted to protest but I still had no energy to speak.
He walked for a little ways until he got to a waterfall that fell deep into the earth. "Okay, we're here Ace. I'm going to set you down 'cause I kinda need my hands for this." He set me down, leaned me against a tree, and looked at me and frowned "Man, you look awful." Well that's a nice thing to tell a girl, I thought as he touched my forehead. His frowned deepened. "You have a fever too. Okay this won't take but a minute." He stood, walked to the edge of the chasm, and bent down and touched the ground. There was a small tremor and then a bridge formed right before my eyes and lead straight into the waterfall.
'Oh great,' I thought 'Now I'm hallucinating.'  
                                                                                                                 -Ace of Spades